My idea for the narrative
would be about a group of teenage girls playing a board game. It then turns
sinister as whoever loses in the game, gets killed outside of the game. Once
the girls realise what is happening, they all decide to stop playing, so that
no one else dies. They look it the rulebook and it tells them that if they
don’t play, it will come back and get them when they least expect it. The girls
ignore the rulebook and one of the girls hides it in their loft. Then, 20 years
the girl’s parents are moving and she finds the game and decides to throw it
away. She puts it outside and doesn’t realise that her teenager daughter has
picked it up and taken it. She then takes it to a sleepover where they
play the game and they get involved.
For my two minutes
sequence, the first scene will be the three girls agreeing to never play the
game again and talking about the other girls dying. I will show the mother
panicking, swearing and running to put the board game outside to put it the
pile to throw away. Then when she goes back into the loft, the game will fall
off the pile and fall into the middle of the hallway. We will see her teenager
daughter come, pick up the game and laugh. Her younger brother will ask her why
she is laughing and she will explain that she is going to give it to her friend
as a joke present at her birthday sleepover.
To make my narrative conventional, I have made sure that the victims are the teenage girls as you would expect a female to be a victim as they are shown as the weaker gender in conventional thriller films. There are many different enigmas in my narrative,such as the following:
To make my narrative conventional, I have made sure that the victims are the teenage girls as you would expect a female to be a victim as they are shown as the weaker gender in conventional thriller films. There are many different enigmas in my narrative,such as the following:
- who is killing them the victims
- where the board game came from? who found it?
- when did the victims die? how did they die?
My characters will be 5 teenager girls, with 3 of them dying and two of them deciding to stop playing with one of these girls finding the board game when they are older and her teenage daughter.
The audience will connect with the victims as they are teenager girls who will be 15-17, so many of the audience might see the character and relate them to someone that they know. Also as they will see the girls at the sleepover beforehand, they will see them having fun and will want that to continue. Most of the audience won't want to see any harm come to the innocent girls who were just playing a game.
You have made a start in considering the narrative for your thriller.
ReplyDeleteTo make this post more detailed you need to consider your other narrative from your group member. Also you need to make the group narrative idea more detailed by considering:
1) the representation of your characters
2) the codes and conventions of a thriller and how your narrative idea is conventional
3) a discussion to explain how your narrative builds a relationship with your target audience