For our opening scene, we had to plan what the actors would say in it. This was because it would help us to plan our itinerary and make our filming for time efficient.
The first scene where there is narration is in the flashback, where Charlotte is walking in and showing her friends, the board game.
They say the following:
Olympia - Charlotte, what's that you've got in your hands?
Jackie (younger Charlotte) - It's a game I just found.
- I found it in my mum's cupboard
Olympia - We should play
Natasha - Why's it so important?
Jackie (younger Charlotte) - Because it's fun!
The next scene which has narration in it is when the girls are going to open the board game. The following is said:
Natasha - I've got no idea how to play this but I'm going to beat you guys.
All - Oh, wow!
Once they have opened the box, all the girls are intrigued and interested by what's inside, which is why they all just make excited noises like the previous above.
The actors speak in the next couple of scenes, where 3 of the girls die on the board game. However, me and Rhiann did not plan what we wanted the actors to say in these scenes as we wanted them to be as realistic as possible and felt that they would be more natural if they said what they would normally say.
This post demonstrates a basic understanding of your thriller film and this is because you have not fully considered the different micro elements and how they will appeal to your audience.
ReplyDeleteYou need to read over your storyboads and aim to include more detailed points on all the areas, as well as considering the conventions too.